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Help With Scene?
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OK, so here's another idea. The Evil General takes control of the throne. He drags the king up on the battlements and orders him to renounce his title. The mass of people of the kingdom, gathered down below, look up in horror, disgust, and anger. The king refuses, so the general kills him. Then the general announces to the people that he is the new king, and that they will do well to obey him. The people, not too happy on hearing this, grab the nearest pitchfork and torch and march upon the castle. The mob storms the palace, kill all those loyal to the general, and even though the general attempts to get away he is eventually caught, cornered, and killed the like the dog he is.
Read the backstory to the first Diablo game. It has something along similer lines, although still quite different.
Why would a nation be angry at their leader because of the death/destruction he wreaked on another nation? Especially during the dark ages.
How about the citizens freeing political prisoners?
Thanks a lot guys! Okay, the wheels are turning now!
That's good to here. It's always a pleasure scratching the back of a fellow writer, or simply human being, for that matter.
Give me some of that sugar high, Magus!
He snorts up pixi sticks, and they get stuck in his nose.
In High School some of my buddies buddies (I have a weird friendship system) ground up and snorted an entire pack of skittles. He said he had multicolored boogers. Good stuff.
Dude, that's like, just totally messed up right there.
Skittles is going a tad too far, in my opinion. What kind of high were they looking for? I'm not so sure that it was suger, by the way you describe it.
Must have been searching for that ever elusive Rainbow high.
Sour Skittles. Tastetastetaste the rainbow.
Reminds me of that game that came out for the GameCube, Darkened Skye... which was an interesting game to play, had the best written dialog EVER for a game, and strangely enough was about finding magic Skittles (literally).
Personally I hate Gamecube, no offense intended. To me Nintendo retired after reaping the success that is/was N64, Super Nintendo, Nintendo and the various Gameboys.
No offense taken. I'm a happy and loyal Nintendo fan to this day. Nintendo deals in quality rather than quality, which seems to be the way that Sony and Microsoft seem to go. In my old age I'm more picky with what I buy, so quality all the way.
"Nintendo deals in quality rather than quality..."
I agree on the Nintendo thing. The only exception for me was Saga Genesis -- I looooooved that Sonic 2 game! I was addicted to it!
Yes, yes... quality rather than quantity. Slip of the keyboard I guess.
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